ext_2197 ([identity profile] samdonne.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] wakeupnew 2008-08-19 05:24 pm (UTC)

Tony shuts off the saw and rocks back on his heels. “Okay.” He snaps his plastic mask up. “Come on, Rhodey, whatever you’re trying to say with that loveable passive-aggressive charm of yours, let’s hear it.”

Those are some pretty amazing voices. You really rock the dialogue in this piece. And the character insights are only outmatched by your subtle handling of the relationship dynamics. Excellent.

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